Friday, January 21, 2005

bad poetry

t.s. eliot online
yesterday i screamed out loud when i remembered a poem i'd written...and actually shared with people. it was a demented moment, sharing that poem. i shall suffer forever after.

good poems are hard to find. poems printed in the TLS cause me to shudder at times. some are very nice.

i grew up reading my mother's favorite poets, so they hang on, like her blackberry pie and early morning solitudes. as a six-year-old child, i favored tennyson & co., as a teen i preferred american poets, and i still like t.s. eliot.

"I should have been a pair of ragged claws
Scuttling across the floors of silent seas."


2 Comments:

Blogger joe h said...

This is a poem I wrote. Hope you like it

Eulogy

Before it's too late
I want you to know

I'm sorry for ever
have hurting you so

You had enough strength
to shrug it all off

I feel I must pay
the ultimate cost

The weight of the guilt now is all mine
I never once thought I would run out of time

I hope there's a way to repay my debt
Until that day comes I truly regret

I owe you that much
To try to make good

I truly do feel that somehow I should

I betrayed your trust and waited too long
to make it back up and now you are gone

By Joe H

In Memory of a Genuinely Good Person,
who shall remain anonymous.
Your Preserverance is Truly Enlightening

also, check out more of my poetry at:

http://www.mixpros.blogspot.com

Thanks

January 28, 2005 at 9:28 AM  
Blogger Teri said...

Truly touching poem. It brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing this.

January 29, 2005 at 11:43 AM  

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